Thursday, 27 October 2016

Narrative Writing

One lovely day a girl named Jade F and keyana went for a walk to see their family in the desert. Next they saw a bad camel it chased them into a hole. After that they screamed "help, help!" Someone heard them. It was a tow truck. It got them out of the hole.

1 comment:

  1. HI jade it is skye I liked how you finished it off properly.