Hi everyone Its me Jade and this is my summer learning journey task for today. Also for this task all we had to do was make a haiku poem about summer. Please leave a positive and lovely comment on my blog bye!!
Kia Ora Jade, Kiana-Marino here from the Summer Learning Journey.
It is awesome to see that you have participated in the haiku activity however unfortunately i am unable to access your 3rd slide due to restrictions, i have requested access. I will make a comment about the two slides that i can access and from what i can see you have done an awesome job at utilising the syllable count with your words. I must agree with you when you said “I am excited for summer. '' Summer makes me excited because that's when i spend most of my time at the beach swimming and hanging out with my friends. Tell me, what is it about summer that makes you excited?
Keep up the awesome work. I look forward to your response and seeing your 3rd slide.
Hello Jade!
ReplyDeleteYour Haiku Poem is wonderful! I hope you are enjoying your holidays and I can't wait to see you next year!
Keep it up,
Aye :)
Hi Aye,
DeleteThanks for the amazing comment. Also I hope you are having an amazing hoilday too,can't wait to see you next year.
From Jade
Kia Ora Jade, Kiana-Marino here from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteIt is awesome to see that you have participated in the haiku activity however unfortunately i am unable to access your 3rd slide due to restrictions, i have requested access. I will make a comment about the two slides that i can access and from what i can see you have done an awesome job at utilising the syllable count with your words. I must agree with you when you said “I am excited for summer. '' Summer makes me excited because that's when i spend most of my time at the beach swimming and hanging out with my friends. Tell me, what is it about summer that makes you excited?
Keep up the awesome work. I look forward to your response and seeing your 3rd slide.
Ngā mihi
Kiana-Marino