Adding Deatail

BEFORE 

During the holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball. We played volleyball for about an hour then had some lunch. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family. I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.

AFTER

During the holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw the beautiful sandy beach and a volleyball net. We asked a very nicely if we could use there volleyball. The nice family said yes you can borrow it. We played volleyball for about an hour then we had some lunch. What we had for lunch was some chicken and chips. As I was eating the chicken and chips I could taste some of the sand in my chicken and chips. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the very nice family. I had a lot of fun at the beach with all of my friends.

Animation Planer

The Way To Go

Rolling Dices

Answer Garden

This is what me and my class did it was all about lifes a stage. The blue words is what I right and the big words is the most.

The Most Dangerous Writing Challaenge

Today me and my class had to do the most Dangerous writing challege. My writing might not be good because It was a speed writing task. We only had 5 minutes to write as much as we could also I was speeding. This is my writing that I didso far. Also If you want to do this Task that my class did click this link https://www.squibler.io/writing-prompt-generator



Once upon a a time there was a man named liam. He lived in Paris. One day Liam went outside because he heared  a big sound. when he went outside there were some people with guns and fire was every were. He saw jets and helicopter. He thought that he was dreaming but he wasn't. Liam was so sad because he didn't want he home to be destroyed. Most Dangerous Writing Task

problem 1 week 1

The top photo and the middle photo is the one miss west showed us. The bottam photo is my groups one